William
Long ago in a town near the woods, there was a little boy name
Anthony. Anthony he lived with his
mother. Anthony’s mother recently got divorced because
the father cheated on her. He wondered, “Why did he do that? He betrayed us. He
cheated on us. Why, why did he do this
to us?” A few years have passed since
then. I’ve just been with my mother ever
since that day. One day, when Anthony
was going home from school, he saw something rustle in the bushes in the woods. Anthony went towards the bushes when he got
close to the bushes a creature came out of the bushes went in to the woods. It
was a caterpillar. Anthony followed it
to an old spooky house but when he went inside he couldn’t see it. He then heard a faint yell. “I’m lost!” the caterpillar screamed. Anthony finally found it and took it
home. His mother was not sad anymore and
didn’t think about the divorce. They had
a new thing to take care of. The End
William - I am very impressed that you took the concept of divorce from the story Hatchet by Gary Paulsen and used it to create a very good story about a caterpillar named Anthony. I like that you are listening and learning so much. Keep up the good work! Ms. E
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